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Broken Wings

Hello friends, with Easter in mind I’ve decided to do another poem…I’ve named it Broken Wings…Sometimes I sit and ask myself what I’d do if I had God’s power, not a pretty sight I promise you, lol…So here’s my new poem, enjoy…Much love to all always, Lynn xxx



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You died for our sins, then proved how you loved
An Angel without wings, a blessing from above
Murdered for a crime, how did this come to be?
If I was in your shoes, a broken heart you’d see!
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Crucified why so? A fate mapped out with course
And still to this day my heart feels much remorse
My Angel and guardian, why did we let you down?
Ridiculed unjust, then thorns became your crown!
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If I walked in your shoes, I’d chalk a big thick line!
And all whom crosses it, vengeance would be mine!
As angry is my cross, SUFFER! Yes for sure!
Poor children of the Earth, you’d never be, no MORE!
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Broken wings I give to you, a Halo at your feet
Pick me up and mend me Lord, for you I give defeat
A time of your rebirth, an egg without a Hen
I close my eyes in prayer, I bless you Lord, AMEN!


22 responses

  1. Kes

    Hi Lynn, Wonderful poem All your poems are really great………………Love Kes x x x x

    March 15, 2008 at 3:33 pm

  2. Polly

    Aother stunning piece Lynn ..very close to my heart Easter is…a time to be reborn ..hugs my woderful friend xxxx

    March 15, 2008 at 3:35 pm

  3. dunno

    hello aunty lynn hope this finds you well hunni, and another gorguss blog, have a wunderful weekend, lee sends luv and hugs and huggies from foxy xxx

    March 15, 2008 at 4:18 pm

  4. Dreamwalker

    Another deep poem Lynn.. I’ve missed them.. love and hugs xx

    March 15, 2008 at 4:26 pm

  5. dawn

    hi LynnGreat Space!cameby to thank you for all your kind wordsesp.concern when i was kinda sickish.smilesdawn

    March 15, 2008 at 9:04 pm

  6. ·.♥.· Sheba's Haven ·.♥.·

    hi lynn, what a lovely poem as usuall.
    im glad you liked my pic.
    thank you so much for mine its beautiful.
    sweet dreams hugs xxxx sunshine

    March 15, 2008 at 11:51 pm

  7. ·.♥.· Sheba's Haven ·.♥.·

    awwwwwwww lynn what a lovely family.
    thank you for sharing that pic with me.
    sweetdreams hugs xxxxx sunshine

    March 16, 2008 at 12:23 am

  8. Nessa

    A beautifully written poem as always Lyn :-)
    Thank you for your kind words i my guestbook
    Love and Light xx

    March 16, 2008 at 1:02 am

  9. Bombshell

    Good Morning Lynn, love your poem lovely as ever,
    i am doing nothing today, i am having a chill day lol
    still feeling rough though my chest is on fire this morning
    so am going nowhere lol. is nessa ok av not heard from
    het for a while now, i hope she aint poorly as well.
    have a lovely day. love n hugs mischief xxxxx

    March 16, 2008 at 10:28 am

  10. Ye Olde

    Hi Lynn,
     You left a message on my blog in January, and I’m sorry I got you mixed up with lynn from Marples Place ( sorry , it ‘s my age, honest! ), and like the silly old fool that I am I have only just realised  : o (
    You have some lovely poems on here, my gran was also called May.. Catherine May, though we all knew her as Catherine ( actually it was more like Gran ).When she had her stroke and was in hospital ,the staff asked what she liked to be called , and we told them Catherine,
    It was then that my mum threw in that when she was younger, she was known  as Maysie ( which came as a bit of a suprise as she was 99 & I was 47, & this was something I hadn’t known before ), and your poem Sweet May struck a chord, especially as she was a very religious person.
    I’m sure she would have loved this poem, and the symbolism contained within.
    Your Auntie May sounds like she was a very special person, it is ovbious you still miss her.
    Thank you for sharing your words, all of them
     With all my very best wishes,
    see you again soon
    Woof woof x

    March 16, 2008 at 9:17 pm

  11. Caroline

    Beautiful x

    March 16, 2008 at 11:10 pm

  12. michelle

    Good night Lynne
    What a beautiful poem for a beautiful heart and soul
    So full of love and empathy your one hell of a woman
    And a shining example to us all
    God bless precious
    Love and hugs for you
    Shelly xxx

    March 16, 2008 at 11:21 pm

  13. Erkan

    March 17, 2008 at 6:36 am

  14. sus

    Hi dear Lynn

    Came to wish u happy Easter and all the best for you.
    A snowdrop
    a sommernar
    a bird besides wings
    a little friend who has you appeal
    you this greeting chests
    And THIS GIFT to you
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    Take care and see you again after the EasterHoliday’s
    Hug and Kiss from
    THANX for being my friend over space :-)
    Im alright again but damn tired after the fever is gone…..see ya

    March 17, 2008 at 1:56 pm

  15. no one special

    Lynn, that is so amazing! I have a friend who used to be a nun back home, she would love this! I always thought Jesus got a raw deal. And I hate to say it, but I think if our Lord came back today, we’d crucify him again. (Blasphemer! I can hear some people shout, LOL!)
    Ah well…I hope you’re feeling better, lovely. Happy St Paddy’s Day!
    Your No. 1 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    March 17, 2008 at 7:01 pm

  16. Walter

    Your gift is not wasted my good friend this is exceptional
    love and hugs Walter xxx

    March 18, 2008 at 6:21 pm

  17. ALISON

    God bless you lynne for such a beautiful poem.
    love and blessings xxxxxali

    March 19, 2008 at 6:48 pm

  18. ·.♥.· Sheba's Haven ·.♥.·

    hi lynn, thank you for the lovely comment.
    im sorry your not well again, hope you better soon.
    ive missed you to very much.take care hugs xxxxxx sunshine

    March 19, 2008 at 10:22 pm

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  20. michelle

    Hello Lynne
    Thank you for you lovely comment
    I am so pleased that you enjoy my poetry
    It always makes me feel humble as you have such a talent yourself
    Anyways sweetheart I hope you and your family
    HAve a wonderful peaceful and blessed Easter time
    Take good care now
    Love and hugs
    SHelly xxxx

    March 20, 2008 at 5:36 pm

  21. Vanessa

    At Last I have got in to your blog. I’ve forgot what it’s about now lol, sorry just kidding.  I think God has a sense of humour. well Sis you know like me that it was such a blessing for this great man to die for us. I hope I get to thank him personally one day (if I’m good enough) that is. Love the poem. Loving you always Nessa

    March 23, 2008 at 11:43 pm

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    March 23, 2008 at 11:58 pm

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