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When You Was Small



Hello again… Do you ever think back to when your children was small, I seem to drift off to the time of my happier moments quite often…Hence my new poem, When You Was Small…I hope you enjoy it, much love again…Lynn xxxx


PhotobucketWhen You Was SmallPhotobucket
A silent word without no speech
A hug to go where clouds can’t reach
A little hope without much chance
A shelter where just you can dance
The biggest memory that I  recall
Is of the days when you was small!
Inside my womb I felt you grow
A miracle with time did show
This movement underneath my skin
And then this yearning spread within
It wont be long just wait and see
For the tiny Angel inside of me!
Alarm bells rang the time was near
Although expected, I shook with fear
Perhaps I’m not quite ready yet
PUSH! She yelled, my forehead’s WET!
And then a sound of whimpering
Placed into my arms a splendorous thing!
Two eyes, one mouth a pretty nose
A smile to die for, without clothes!
This miniature version of my kin
The greatest feeling felt within
So the very best memory that I recall
Was the day we met, When You Was Small!








17 responses

  1. Kes

    Hi Lynn, a nice little poem where do they all come from I don’t how you do it Love Kes x x x x x

    April 20, 2008 at 4:05 pm

  2. Zeynep

    Lol… I think you are having a very creative day. Enjoy! xx

    April 20, 2008 at 4:21 pm

  3. ·.♥.· Sheba's Haven ·.♥.·

    hi lynn my friend, i always think of you.
    i wasn’t on last night, as i wasn’t very well. im not to bad now though.
    ive been in bed all day,  though i did get up for a bath.
    hope your weekend as been a good one.
    hugs xxxx sunshine

    April 20, 2008 at 4:29 pm

  4. sus

    Hi dear Lynn 
    Thank’s dear for the lovely gift and message …Just home from my weekend with the family. We have really enjoy the day’s out in the lovely sun. Im red in my face LMAO……to much sun ha ha ha !!!
    I see our dear Sheila is sick ?? ooh that’s bad BUT i hope she will be okay soon….i had been with her today to leave a message ….LOL…..take care have a lovely week ahead.
    I love all your Poem in here :-)
    Hug and sunshinekiss from *SUS*

    April 20, 2008 at 5:34 pm

  5. michelle

    Oh Lynne
    This poem is just breath taking I am sat here in tears
    This is exactly how i feel about my boys
    Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful heart with us
    You always move me with your words you are an inspiration
    I hope that this finds you happy and well
    And your weekend was as beautiful as you are
    Love for you always
    Shelly xxx

    April 20, 2008 at 7:13 pm

  6. Unknown

    xx Jesa

    April 20, 2008 at 9:38 pm

  7. Aussie

    Absolutely beautiful my friend,the feelings I get
    from your poetry is so clear the words carry
    such depth and emotion,
    you are very talented Lynn
    thank you again for sharing your words

    April 20, 2008 at 11:44 pm

  8. p

    Lynn, this was a great poem, so great, it makes you want to go back when you was small, lol…thanks for your kind comments….I will be here again cause I love poetry…I wish more ppl enjoyed poetry…have a great week my dear. xx

    April 21, 2008 at 12:40 am

  9. ·.♥.· Sheba's Haven ·.♥.·

    hi lynn, well i suppose she is sexy.
    but she as got wings, so she must be an angel haha.
    as you can see by the time i couldn’t sleep.
    i did go to bed, but got up at 3 30.
    hope you have a good night’s sleep though.
    hugs xxxx sunshine

    April 21, 2008 at 2:51 am

  10. ☆° Lady Jude

    Hi Lynn….. Hope all is going well with you, lovely poem just never stop your writing. Hugs 4U

    April 21, 2008 at 4:01 am

  11. Newman

    hey lynn,U’ve done it again,nice job!
    Thank U for sending me the beautiful picture!
    Have a great week xxx

    April 21, 2008 at 11:19 am

  12. sus

    Hello Lynn
    have a great day and evening
    For you LOL
    <a href="http://tinypic.com" target="_blank"><img src="http://i26.tinypic.com/egzqc2.jpg" border="0" alt="Image and video hosting by TinyPic"></a>
    Take care i will out now in the sun.
    See ya and i do not hope this Parrot will be Naughty again LMAO….ha ha ha
    Hug from *SUS’

    April 21, 2008 at 1:24 pm

  13. Vanessa

    Bravo Sis this really is one of your best.  Its hard though because all your work is so good. Love Nessa

    April 21, 2008 at 2:01 pm

  14. Maureen

    Hi Lynn, what a lovely poem again
    all your poems are great well done,
    i think i had better keep to the hospital docs
    now don’t you hehehehe. Dr Kes to the rescue lol
    oh i will be back hopefully on wednesday.
    i will take my liitle good luck bear with me, thank you lol.
    have a great evening. love ya lots.
    big hugs mo xxxxxxx

    April 21, 2008 at 3:27 pm

  15. ann

    That was really good Lynn I loved it . Ann xxx

    April 21, 2008 at 5:25 pm

  16. Dreamwalker

    Hi Lynn Wow.. I just love your poems….you just capture every emotion and my mind flew back to the very same moment of that wonderful moment of Motherhood..
    Thank you,… You are so talented xxxxx

    April 21, 2008 at 7:55 pm

  17. Diane

      hi lynne how you feeling today hunni and thankyou for your visit you poetry sure is something else so loveely i always love to come read them you have such a talent hugs Diane xx

    April 26, 2008 at 1:21 pm

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