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Little John And The Bird

Good morning friends, as spaces is a bit quite I decided to do another story poem…This one is about a young tiger named John…Imagine being left on your own without a Mother just beacause of hunters taking her life for her fur…So hence meet…Little John And The Bird…Enjoy…Have a beautiful day, and may you be kept safe…Thinking of you, love, Lynn xxxx


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Deep inside of the forest, the creatures felt despair
The sound of gunshots echoed throughout the morning air
The time was hunting season, all the animals were forlorn
Accept for one young tiger, as his little heart was torn!
 The men that held the boom machine were getting really near
Yet little John the tiger, had not the time to fear
He watched his Mama weeks ago when hunting for her pray
She lay inside a pool so red, these words he heard her say!
“Dear Lord please watch my little John, make his spirit strong
Please be there to comfort him, and may his days be long
Although I’m dying needlessly to make someone’s attire
They know not what just what they do.” Her breath then does expire!
The ground did shake the birds awake, a scurrying of wings
A flocking of the fearful kind, a sound of shrills do spring
Upon the floor the feathers fell, no chorus had these birds
Yet still John lay in wait alone, no roar from him was heard!
A little breeze of tiny wings landed by John’s side
This baby bird with eyes of tears, then onto John she flied
“Please don’t eat me Master John, my Mamma I can’t find.”
Upon the ground some feathers lay, John roared at humankind!
She spread her wings to cover eyes, something was then amiss
She felt much fear as John drew near, upon her head he kissed
A man approaches with his gun, with pound signs in his eyes
A trophy for him so he thought! the little bird then sighs!
John leapt to save this tiny bird, his roar was ever bold
He killed the gunman with one swipe, his temper now gone cold
He lifted her onto his back, then told her not to fear
As in his heart this bird now lay, he then shed one small tear!
Inside of the deep forest, where darkness once did live
Two friends hearts shine so brightly, now both do now forgive
There Mama’s watched them with much joy, from way up high above
As now deep inside this forest, two friends do share much love!




38 responses

  1. Kes

    Hi Lynn, WOW l really enjoyed reading your poem it’s just like a little movie………love Kes x x x x x

    May 6, 2008 at 11:04 am

  2. nita

    hi lynn, that is brilliant, you are very talented, thanks for sharing, love and hugs – nita.

    May 6, 2008 at 11:07 am

  3. Walter

    Lynn this is amazing I am truly lost for words it was so very touching
    I know this has touched me
    Love and hugs from your No I Fan Walter xxx

    May 6, 2008 at 11:28 am

  4. Newman

    Hi Lynn,little John and the bird, such a lovely poem with wonderful pictures,wow! I can see that U R not just talented in poems,good job! Thank U for sending me two pretty ladys haha:) I’m proud to be a Maddiecop,I really really hope this little Angle be found soon.
    Wish U a great day xxx

    May 6, 2008 at 1:00 pm

  5. Newman

    Hi Lynn,thank U for being the first one to read my new post! I’m also trying to write some poems myself but feel pretty hard to do it. I think U R a talented poet,do U know any secret of writing a poem? :)

    May 6, 2008 at 1:12 pm

  6. Aussie

    Absolutely brilliant Lynn,I enjoyed this
    poem immensly,a beautiful picture
    that you painted in my mind
    thank you my friend

    May 6, 2008 at 1:58 pm

  7. joanne

    Hi Lynn why do people have to make these poor animals suffer there is no need for it , well that a very heart felt poem very touching good job ive got a hanky on me. well take care dear friend big huggs. Jo xxxx

    May 6, 2008 at 2:03 pm

  8. Sweet

    A lovely poem well done you are brilliant love suexx

    May 6, 2008 at 3:04 pm

  9. ღ_BabyEvelyne

    Hi !
    you’ve got a really beautiful space ! I love it in here !
    Have a nice day!
    Hughs & x-x-x

    May 6, 2008 at 6:43 pm

  10. ۞ LiCiOuZ ۞

    hi lynn this is a great bloggy 😉 oh ya all sleepy today then hun , im sleepy now, mo and sheila have been running riot lmao  (( naked threw spaceland  )) weve had some fun hahaha. night night lynn catch up soon luvs ya loads
    huggies liciouz oxo

    May 7, 2008 at 10:00 pm

  11. closed

    Morning Lynn….a truly lovely poem…brought tears to my eyes
    Take care xx Ju xx

    May 8, 2008 at 6:44 am

  12. michelle

    You have done it again Lynne
    Moved me to tears wth your beauty
    Such empathy compassion and understanding in this poem
    I was gripped from the first word to the last
    What a special talent you have only the purest heart could write words such as this
    Thank you for sharing you wonderful heart with us all Lynne
    TAke care lots of love for you
    Shelly xxxx

    May 8, 2008 at 9:55 am

  13. michelle

    No Lynne it is I that needs to thank you
    Having a friend like you touches my heart
    And allows my soul to sing
    And yes she was a very special lady who I think of everyday
    But its ok as she lives on really Lynne deep inside of me
    TAke care precious Shelly xxx

    May 8, 2008 at 10:57 am

  14. Newman

    thx for sending me the nice picture! Wish U a nice day xxx

    May 8, 2008 at 12:01 pm

  15. Maureen

    Hi Lynn, another beautiful poem you sure know how to bring tears on lol.
    i have just took my freezer and fridge out to see if the hamster is there
    but he aint, am sitting up all night tonight he should hopeully come out for food
    i don’t think he will be poorly so no need for the doc hehehehehe,
    love n hugs mischief xxxxxxx

    May 8, 2008 at 12:21 pm

  16. ღ_BabyEvelyne

    Hi my dear friend Lynn ! X
    how are you? Thank you for your visit too :-)
    & It was a pleasure to visit yours. It’s a very nice space !
    Have a nice day !
    Hughs & x-x-x

    May 8, 2008 at 6:08 pm

  17. Vanessa

    I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. Oh Sis it is amazing I  was gripped from the start. More please. Nessa

    May 8, 2008 at 8:26 pm

  18. Earth

    Great poem Lynn and loved the twist.
    Love eleanor xx

    May 8, 2008 at 11:11 pm

  19. ann

    Lynn that was great really really great I so enjoyed that . Love Ann xxx

    May 9, 2008 at 3:56 pm

  20. ღ_BabyEvelyne

    Hi my dear friend Lynn ! X
    how are you? Thank you for visiting again 😉
    Do you have plans for the weekend?
    Have a nice weekend too 😉
    Hughs & x-x-x

    May 9, 2008 at 8:01 pm

  21. Stevy

    Lynn dear, what can I say….you are the greatest poet in the world.   I so love your poems with deep passion and feelings.  Kisses to my  poet laureate.  Steve

    May 10, 2008 at 1:05 am

  22. sus

    Dear Lynn
    What a lovely POEM again……………you a very great POET !!!!
    Happy Mum’s day
    Hug from sus
    It’s really a lovely weather here right now so i will enjoy my family now !!!
    See ya
    Happy weekend :-)

    May 10, 2008 at 10:17 am

  23. Polly

    Awww Lynn another masterpiece i see here, your poetry is so beautiful just like you my dearest frend, keep on writing them hun ..hugs and love xxx

    May 11, 2008 at 6:25 am

  24. ... Angelwitch

    Heya darling  :)
    arrgh! Bloody poachers drive me mad, just how moronic they are.
    what’s more majestic in the natural world than the Tiger? Yet there are so few left now.
    it’s a beautiful tale you’ve told darling :)
    as for me, call it the perks of being somewhat bipolar, how i’ve been feeling lately.
    i have good spells and bad spells, and recently it’s been the latter.
    maybe someday i’ll find out how to banish it, but for now i’m just trying to stop myself
    undoing all the work and effort i’ve put in over the last 18 months in getting it back under control again.
    hope you’re having a great weekend with this weather :)

    May 11, 2008 at 8:18 am

  25. Newman

    Hi Lynn,thx for sharing the lovely picture with me,really beautiful!Wish U a great day,lots of smiles for ya xxxRichard:)

    May 11, 2008 at 3:28 pm

  26. ·.♥.· Sheba's Haven ·.♥.·

    hi lynn. thank you for your comment on my pic.
    im glad you have calmed down now.
    hey dont worry about kes, im sure he will survive haha.
    your welcome for the piccies my friend.
    hugs xxxx sunshine

    May 11, 2008 at 5:33 pm

  27. Nicola

    aww thanks for the comments hun :) the weather has been lovely its been that nice ive started on me garden lol i hate gardening i love the sun tan you get thowe hehe…………… hope you have had a lovely weekend, i went to a barbiecue last night it was really nice chilling wif friends and all the kids were playeing :) i had to be up for church this morning thowe so i dident get pissed lol well i hope you enjoye you’r week  x lill nicki x

    May 11, 2008 at 9:41 pm

  28. Caroline

    Awww Lynn this is so lovely!  I love the way you write poetry. x

    May 12, 2008 at 7:58 am

  29. Newman

    Hi Lynn,hehe your picture really bright my day,I love it:)Wish U a great day and have lots of fun xxxRichard:)

    May 12, 2008 at 11:47 am

  30. Dreamwalker

    Well Lynn.. you’ve gone and done it again haven’ you!.. here I am blubbering all over my laptop.. Brilliant.pure and simple… I loved every word I hung onto.. my love and gratitude to you for your wonderful words that are as always guided by Those unforseen realms, combinding your love of Life and Nature…
    Love and Blessings Lynn… xxx and much Gratitude for sharing xxxx

    May 13, 2008 at 2:10 pm

  31. j

    Always nice to read your stuff,keep it up ,all the best and enjoy the sunshine while it lasts.

    May 14, 2008 at 2:38 am

  32. Poppy

    Aw Lynn, you got me crying with this one too…wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

    May 14, 2008 at 9:37 am

  33. Alicia

    Hi Lynn,
    I tried to leave a message in your guestbook, but couldn’t find the link to do so for some reason.  Thanks for all your recent comments on my guestbook.  I appreciate you stopping by and apologize for not having replied sooner.  I have been a bit under the weather. 
    Thanks for sharing your lovely poems and stories with us :)  Hope you have a great weekend

    May 15, 2008 at 3:28 am

  34. Newman

    Hi Lynn,thank U for your nice words.20000 lifes have passed away in one night,many of them R kids….may their souls rest in peace….
    Have a great weekend,take care xxx

    May 15, 2008 at 1:58 pm

  35. sus

    Hello dear Lynn
    Now it’s time to wish u happy weekend ………….every time i get in here there are always a new and LOVELY poem and the Music i love it so much …….hope you doing fine and relax in the sun ???
                            ╔╗                                               ║║╔═╦╦╦═╗                         ║╚╣║║║║╩╣                        ╚═╩═╩═╩═╝Take care sweet Lynn, !!!!! (\ ***/)  (\ *** /) (\ ***/)  (\ ***/) (\ *** /) ( \(_)/ )   ( \(_)/ )  ( \(_)/ )   ( \(_)/ ) ( \ (_)/ )                   (_ /|\ _)  (_ /|\ _)  (_ /|\ _)  (_ /|\ _) (_ /|\ _)   /___\      /___\      /___\      /___\      /___\ ¸.•*´¨`*•.¸¸.•*´¨`*•.¸¸.• •*´¨`*•.¸¸.•*´¨`*•.¸                     000000___00000                    00000000_0000000                    0000000000000000                      00000000000000                         00000000000                             00000                                 0                          ♥~Butterfly Sus~♥¸.•*´¨`*•.¸¸.•*´¨`*•.¸¸.• •*´¨`*•.¸¸.•*´¨`*•.¸
    Life is too short to wake up with regrets. So love the people who treat you right. Forget about the ones who don’t. Believe everything happens for a reason. If you get a second chance, grab it with both hands.   If it changes your life, let it.   Nobody said life would be easy, they just promised it would be worth it. 

    May 15, 2008 at 9:05 pm

  36. ·÷±‡±.тαту

    I see your blog… and is so beautiful…
    I hope you see mine…
    p.s. sorry for the ugly pronuciation
    bye… xxx

    May 17, 2008 at 10:14 pm

  37. ۞ LiCiOuZ ۞

    Good morning lynn thansk for the funny comment on the pink patch ahahhhaa yea we’ll av a box of them please think i’ll stick one on my face to as i luv pink so much hahahhaha.
    hope yr aving a good weekend my lickle honey pot , huggies liciouz oxo

    May 18, 2008 at 9:09 am

  38. sus

    Hi dear Lynn
    Thank’s again …………….this is to you :
    Have a lovely sunday and happy week ahead.
    Sunny weather in denmark / im out soon ha ha ha
    Hug and Love from *SUS*

    May 18, 2008 at 9:42 am

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